Pelicans Class were asked to choose between three pictures so that they could write a story:
I can honestly say that I have been BLOWN AWAY by the stories that I have read today! They have such fantastic detail and the children have clearly tried so hard. I am so impressed- we will definitely be doing some more writing next week based on some different pictures! Have a read of some their stories by clicking on the links below:
The Rainforest from the Sloth’s Eye- by Helena
(Look out for her illustrations, too)!
(Look out for Charlotte’s use of fronted adverbials and even some Harry Potter references)!
(Look out for his excellent expanded noun phrases)!
(Look out for his speech marks)!
(Look out for his use of conjunctions)!
(Look out for his fronted adverbials!)
Pelicans- I am so proud of you all! Reading these stories made my day and reminded me again of what wonderful writers you are.
If any other Pelicans have written a story and would like to send it to me- you are not too late! I can easily add it to this post.